A mysterious house. A new family has just moved in.
The writing was pretty good, but I felt it may have gone overboard with describing the overall creepiness of the house. The eeriness, the rancidness, the mustiness, etc. Okay, we get it—the house reeked. Story started off pretty slow. Was it really necessary to have to go through the looking, the proposal, and the escrow? Maybe that took up too much time. When does stuff start happening in this house?
I think this story had the potential to be a scary tale, but I just thought it was too slow and rather dull.
My rating: 2 stars