Kane is a
billionaire boss—your regular, pompous arrogant jackass. Set to complain to the
manager of a restaurant, he is suddenly captivated by Josephine. Right off the
bat, there is this sexual tension between the two.
Certain
words were misused and overused—repeated, actually— throughout the whole thing.
I definitely would’ve cleaned up some of these areas. Even though the book
required some minor editing, the love story comes across loud and clear.
Josephine’s
feelings of plain inadequacy were endearing and relatable. Of course, I
would’ve preferred a little more background info on the two characters;
instead, the romance took immediate flight the second the two laid eyes on each
other.
Story is
fast and to-the-point. Although it doesn’t lag, I think it could’ve benefited
with a little expansion—expansion on the character’s livelihood, their
motivation, etc. The twist in the plot didn’t appear until near the end of the
story, which ended in a cliffhanger. Story was underdeveloped as it is, so why
add a cliffhanger to boot? It just felt incomplete.
Overall, I
think this story had good characters and a nice story line to start, but it could’ve
been better.
My rating: 2.5 stars
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