James had killed someone. It was
supposed to be a robbery, but all he got was $32 out of it—not enough to help
his mama. And the news had the reports on him.
Rebecca will never forget the last
time she saw her husband and son alive—it was the night they both disappeared.
Story tends to be too descriptive on
the scenery, even when looking at a photograph. It would seem that every little
thing sparked a memory for the main character. She just re-lived too many
memories, which slowed down the story a lot. And what a lengthy funeral, which
just described the memories, the process, and the angry feelings. We’re just
dawdling away here. Story over embellishes when it should’ve been progressing.
Heck, there’s even over embellishment on James’ side—on his childhood and
whatnot. C’mon, let’s a get a move on! I’m just waiting for the
mystery/thriller part here….
My rating: 2
stars
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