John and
Dave were friends that had a run-in with the police. For a while, that seemed
to be the sole focus, until a trust fund changes their lives forever.
The writing
was okay. At first, the story seemed simple enough, even with the clutter of
various characters and its constant back-and-forth dialogue. Still, the
characters bring chaos to the narrative, which confuses the reader. It also
seemed repetitious and tended to lag. The premise sounded interesting to me,
but it was still difficult to get into this story.
My rating: 2 stars
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