A Cops Necklace
by Norm Meech
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GENRE: Thriller/Mystery
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BLURB:
It has been nearly a year since the murder and
kidnapping happened at the McPherson mansion. Everything has returned to being
quiet and normal around the mansion until a package is delivered to Alex
McNeil.
Inside the carefully wrapped package, Alex finds an
expensive-looking antique necklace. There is also a note inside the package
that reads, "Mr. McNeil, you have exhibited the ability of being a good
investigator. Find out who stole the necklace, and you will find out who
murdered her."
Investigation determines that the necklace belonged
to missing Bisson City police sergeant Jennifer Thomson, who was presumed to
have been kidnapped and murdered 10 years ago. Alex takes a leave of absence
from the McPherson mansion, and is hired by the Bisson City police force on a
short-term-employment contract. Alex teams up with his old police partner
Stephanie Foster, and they renew their close friendship while investigating
what happened to their missing colleague, Sergeant Thomson.
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Excerpt One:
"I then commented that Machen (Mickey) Chang was the
boss of the Wolfang Warriors Clan and that one of our Asian informants in our
witness protection program had been killed by a sniper. I explained that on August 26, 2008, Bobby
Cho, age 31 had been shot and killed exiting our safe house on the way to
court. Cho was supposed to testify
against Chang, on a murder charge.
The murder had questioned our police services ability to
protect people in our witness protection program. Apparently, Jennifer was angry that she had
lost a witness and she took it personally."
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Review: This all started with a mysterious package with a necklace and a note.
“Find out who stole the necklace, and you will find out who murdered her.”
It was the one case Alex McNeil was never able to solve. This was the motivation that brought Alex out of police retirement for at least a month.
Story had a good diary-style narrative; however, it tells much more than it shows. Rather than illustrating the dialogue as dialogue, the character tells us what was said in summary instead. Too passive and less active.
The story had a compelling start and premise, but it does take a while to really get into it as the main character was more focused on explaining the odds-and-ends of the police force. Very mild and tame with some repetition. In chapter 2, the police reports exactly what Alex already told us in chapter 1. Needless to say, the police overview was also a little dry and technical.
After the briefing, which really wasn’t that brief, the narrative continues with the minutiae of trivial routines and bland pleasantries. What should’ve been more exciting was really very trifling. There was an interesting case somewhere in this pile of lengthy narratives and precise dictations, but you really have to look deep to get a glimpse of it.
Overall, this was a fairly nice and structured read.
Rating:
3 stars
AUTHOR Bio and Links:
Norm retired from the Barrie Police Service on December 31, 2021, and he believes that, besides his family, one of his greatest's accomplishments was to be employed as a police officer for over 44 years.
Metropolitan
Toronto Police Cadet: October 1976 to September 1978
Canadian
National Railroad Police Constable: December 3, 1979 to June 6, 1997
Barrie
Police Service: Constable/Staff Sergeant June 9, 1997 to December 31, 2021
Norm
is enjoying retirement. and fitness is a part of his life. He is gaining more
knowledge and experience as an author, and he plans on publishing more fiction
books in the future.
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The book sounds very intriguing.
ReplyDeleteGreat excerpt and giveaway. :)
ReplyDeleteNorm Meech is a new author to me, but I want to thank this blog for the introduction. I saw his books on Goodreads and I plan on reading them.
ReplyDeleteSound like a great story.
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading the review! Sounds like an interesting read!
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