Anita died
last night in Central Park—murdered, in fact. But her ghost still remained. Her
mind was a jumble of confusion and chaos. What did this mean? Odd thing is that
she can’t remember anything.
Too analytical
and repetitive. The character tends to babble on, going off tangent. It needed
to be more directed to the murder (that’s what I wanted to know about.)
Instead, she’s talking about Grandma and Fluffy. WTF?! C’mon, get on with it
already!
Eventually,
we start to relive her last day (good, at least, we’re getting somewhere.) But
it doesn’t go anywhere at all. In fact, it goes right back to where we started:
nowhere.
I thought I
would like this. I expected to like this. But it was just one big, fat disappointment.
My rating: 2 stars
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