Very slow start. Very slow period.
The slow pace was basically comprised of describing every little thing and action. In chapter 1, the killer was hauling a body in the trunk. In chapter 2, Bella was working out every muscle in the gym. The sentences were overly descriptive without saying much. I wanted to get on with the story already. I should’ve been hooked from page 1 on the story, not be bogged down by so many useless details.
So disappointed in Adam for this.
Rating:
1 star
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