“Thanks to her despicable ex-fiancé, her life had been reduced to begging in a junk shop for her next meal.”
With this son by her side, Camilla was trying to survive. Unbelievable how she was accused of taking money her fiancé took. Nobody believed her, but Office Ryan saw the truth in her lovely eyes.
Well-written, but slow. Very descriptive, which was full of lovely words, but were they really necessary? We just need the plot to push forward. Interesting premise, but the execution could use a little work.
My rating: 3 stars
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